Wednesday, June 12, 2013

Describing a process - making a bird feeder

Tawanashe wrote,
"First I spread with the knife seeds and margarine.  Then I hold the pinecone.  The teacher helps me and it is messy and sticky.  The teacher helps me tie the string and it has lots of seeds and the pinecone is brown."


Rafael wrote,
"First we get a pinecone and we spread it with a plastic knife.  We spread the butter and seed on the outside of the pinecone.  Then we tie the string."

Andrew wrote,
"First we get a little brown pinecone and spread some bird seeds on top of the pinecone.  Then we get a long grey string.  The teacher helps me tie the string at the bottom."


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